Blogging health check 2

Blogging Health Check 2
Hi Seun

Here is your feedback for blogging health check 2. You should write a blog post reflecting on this and how you are going to improve.

“I’ve seen you putting a lot of effort into solidifying your film idea but you need to make sure that you are explicit about these developments on your blog to get the marks. Write a blog post on your new idea and how this developed through group discussion and feedback from the pitch.

When you film you need to make sure that you continue to do this. Post targets for a filming session for what you want to achieve, plan your route to the location or check the weather report. Then after filming reflect on whether you achieved this and if you changed anything.

You could also look at the teen films that are most similar to your idea to back up your decision. You could then use YouGov profiler to look at the audience for these films and compare them to your target audience, as you don’t have any audience work in your research. You also need some more work on institutions. Write a post on whether your film is being made by a mainstream or independent production company and how this will affect the title sequence.”

Phoebe has clearly shown me where I need to improve In order to make my blog look good, I will start working on his ASAP