FINAL VIDEO

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PRELIM

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Feedback from First Rough Cut

The feedback we got from dan on our first rough cut was that, it was a good attempt for the first rough cut,  however he said that we had a lot to improve on, he told us that there were a lot of shots that really didn't need to be there and that we should get rid off in order to make the title sequence look more realistic. He said in our second rough cut we should include more close ups in order to show emotion in each other's faces so it could have a greater effect on our title sequence and the audience. He also mentioned adding some foley sounds and a prominent soundtrack to emphasise emotion in our title sequence.

He also told us that the title credits were not clear enough, and to make things a bit easier we should use motion instead of doing them on Final Cut Pro (our initial idea). Some of e titles covered some actors faces so we were told to adjust the frame on Final Cut Pro. 

- To improve my work i will redo the title credits and make sure that they are organised and are placed on the frame so that no crucial bits are missing. 
- film more close ups to emphasise emotion
- remove any irrelevant shots that may have been seen. 

Final Editing

Editing the final parts of our title sequence I must say was the most challenging for me as we had to try and fit certain shots together to show emotion as it is quite a touchy subject, even though we are not being marked on our acting, if the acting was top notch it would an effect on the whole title sequence. finding a soundtrack and putting a soundtrack on our title sequence was also particularly challenging for me as we had to find an instrumental that was not too sad but also not too jumpy to fit with the title sequence. We realized that music with piano sounds and mellow sounds would be the most appropriate for our title sequence and editing the music so the music fades out in the end. As a group we made a huge effort to make our title sequence look realistic as we were told that the story line we chose was too complicated for us to handle, however we took all our criticisms and turned them into only positive things and the outcome was amazing.

Final Story Line

A few changes have were made in the end of our story line. It Will first start off as the male character in the living room looking through his female partners Facebook messages, we then see the female in the kitchen cooking. It then shows the male confronting the female about the messages seen on her Facebook, she tells her partner that she does not know who the messages are from and she doesn't reply, we then see the male character getting angry and throwing a tantrum,. grabbing her arm as she tries to walk away. She runs off in a panic and hides in her bedroom behind the door when we proceed to a flashback of the times that they first met. They look happy with each other and these were times when the relationship was good and healthy. We then return back to the present and see her crying and hesitating to call the police. at this point the male character is banging on the door and gaining anger, we see her dial 999 and that's where the scene fades into the main title of the film.

11 What are the sub genres

There are two sub genres for Teen Dramas:

High School Drama

The Inbetweeners

Is a Tv series that recently got turned into a movie. Its about Best friends Will McKenzie, Simon Cooper, Jay Cartwright and Neil Sutherland who are not cool enough to hang out with the cool kids who they want to be like. They have just graduated from their suburban London high school. Simon has finally been able to get the girl who he has been in love with since young Carli D'Amato, to be his girlfriend. But because they will be going away to different schools in the fall, Carli breaks up with Simon. His three best mates decide to take him on vacation for two weeks to get some sun, sand and girls To get his mind of her.

Characters and Social Groups

James Buckley
Was born on August 14, 1987 in Croydon, England as James Patrick Buckley. He is an actor, known for The Inbetweeners Movie, The Inbetweeners 2

Simon Bird
Was born on August 19, 1984 in Guildford, Surrey, England. He is an actor and writer, known for The Inbetweeners Movie, The Inbetweeners 2 and The Inbetweeners

Blake Harrison
Went Brit School from 2003 and then the East 15 Acting School from 2007. He made his first appearance in The Inbetweeners on E4 as Neil and also appeared in two episodes of The Bill for ITV as Pete Monks in 2008.

Joe Thomas
Joe Thomas was born on October 28, 1983 in Chelmsford, Essex, England as Joseph Thomas. He is an actor and writer, known for The Inbetweeners Movie, The Inbetweeners 2 and The Inbetweeners 

Youth Drama

Boyz In The Hood

Plot: A young 10 years old boy Tre is a black male in a ghetto area he is smart but aggresive so he is sent to live with his father in South Central LA. The story depicts life in the ghetto and the thngs he has to experience on his journey to becoming a man.


Kidulthood

Plot: Set in 2002, the film follows two days in the lives of a group of 15-year olds from an area in West London. The story focuses mainly on the characters Trevor, known as "Trife" and Alisa, his on and off partner. One of the themes of the movie is Alisa's pregnancy. She states that Trife is the father. Trife is not rally happy to hear that he has a child at his age. Trife unfortunately has a dramatic death in the end as he is hit with a bat hard to the stomach by Sam. The youth in this film are shown to be reckless and antisocial young people who commit crimes such as petty theft and serious violence. The film also showcases how youths take part in drug taking and some sexual behaviour.

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The similarities with High school&Youth drama film are:

• Both of them end with the title of who the film was written and/or directed by.
• Also both the title sequences start with a blank screen with some text on it then move to moving images.

The differences with High school&Youth drama film are:

• In a High school drama the title sequence is in most cases longer than others, this is usually because High school drama's in most cases it has more casts and more people producing it.
• Linking back to the bullet point above High school dramas are mainly mainstream production and Youth drama's are usually independent films. Ive noticed High school dramas have a more entertaining side whereas youth dramas are more serious and most likely to be based on real live events.

Rough Cut

Final Project In The Making (Editing)

At this point of editing as a group we have imported our clips of our short film onto 'Final Cut Pro' and we are just reviewing the what we have filmed and deciding how to present it as best as possible with effective shot angles; special effects to create an intend atmosphere to go with the genre and the story line and also transitions that ail go well and fit in with the mood that is being created to intrigue the audience watching.

34 - Production Schedule

We care going to start Filming on 29th January and we will continue throughout the following lessons: 2nd February and 5th February.  However this is not enough time to do all of our recordings, so we will have to make time during the week and film more on the weekend, 7th February

37 - Brand our blog

Storyboard

Location of Filming

 

This is the first location we will be using because it is a local quiet area and i will be using my Fathers car to shoot a scene of the title sequence.

We will then use this park location as the flashback location which is local to the first location so not much movement will be necessary.

Change of scenario

We changed the whole scenario of a boy being mislead. This is because it caused corruption to our group causing collision in what everyone was saying. So I came up with the idea of a girl getting domestically abused. I thought of this idea through 'Murdered by my boyfriend' Which was a channel four teen drama. We thought this idea clear and throughly and thought that this would be best for us to act out and we could gain a lot of shots from it.

Feedback

The feedback we received was to make our title sequence simpler than it already is, as he thought there was too many things going on for a title sequence. Also we was told domestic violence is a topic that wold be hard for us, as he thought it would be difficult for us to make it look serious. We'll use music and sound effects in order to make more realistic.

My Prelim

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Costume for the title sequence (31)

For the female character Seun (Samantha) the costume for her will be:

Leather Jacket

All black All Star Converse Hi-tops

Black floppy hat

Black High Waisted Jeans

The costume that will be used for Harjeets character will be:

Navy Nike Cap

Navy jacket

Black Jeans

Black Prada's

The costume that Flo (Obed) will be using is:

Black Jeans

Grey Padded Jacket

All black creative recreation